Dream Deep

Muahahaha. Ah, but you ruined my fun - no more haikus? Lol, you need to set a deadline for the next installment, that way I can harangue you about going ...

The new one's up. Yay me. :wink:

Chapter Three It occurred to Shan that whatever custodian ended up sweeping the floor up in the back rows would be finding a number of half-smoked cigarettes of biblical proportions, ...

Allright then. :twisted: Lol, you're lucky. I shall return momentarily to crit. ^_^

*whistles* Thanks Sam, for the hefty crit. ^_~ A few questions though.. - Your third paragraph. The description of the book was very real- it was (how to put this?) ...

Lol... ^_~ *munches happily on cookies*

Awwww. This is sweet. I have a cat named Porki who is exactly the same way, and I think it's adorable the way you've put this to writing. ^_~

Awww. Lol, you get a cookie too. ^_^ Not fair how awesome I write?! ...(says the girl who totally blew me away with Inscription...) :roll: But I'm glad you enjoyed ...

Awww. I love you. *hugs* Heh... You're so nice. You deserve a cookie. *offers cookie...* Well. I would have gotten the rewrite and continuation posted today but for the fact ...

( continued ) Either italicised or perhaps broken into new paragraphs? As it is, Shan's voice runs into the description and the impression becomes somewhat vague rather than fierce. Aside ...

I liked Levin. Poor guy... he was so nice. ^_~

Ahh. Shpe'oni/spijuni. Coolness. Lol, keep your eyes open, Strazhas might become Spijuni in a later draft... :wink: Lol, don't worry about it, Imp. I'm going to try to get a ...

Lol, a Russo feel to it? Heh, that's what Reas said... 18th-19th C... it could be, but I never really took the time to figure out the exact times... it's ...

Lol, I'm not offended. It just got to me for some reason... Hehe, and I think Sharty's a guy... ^_~

No problem. :wink: